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Reviews For: The Voices Around Me
phantom-jedi 2006-10-26 . chapter 1
A neat description of operatic singers. My only suggestion is to keep the same theme throughout. You switch from song to singer. While this is not a bad thing, it can be confusing.

All in all, a very nice poem with strong feeling and repetition. Good job!

Keep writing!

phantom_jedi
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