The emotion is captured so honestly and subtly, and it certainly is a familiar feeling.

Love the occasional rhyming of words scattered here and there - defintely a great work.

Is that a promise? Because sometimes it doesn't happen. I love your style, kid. It's cool and newage and hopeless and raunchy and excellent. I love it to death. You said I might love Lash. That clicked for me. Made me think. Thanks. :]

Aww... I love it. I have a friend like that... SO sweet. The end was really cute, "see you tomorrow" instead of "i love you..." Wow. I love the format, too. It really adds a lot to the poem. And the descriptions were excellent, "sleeping half the time anyway.but it’s a gentle kind of sleep; the one not-so-deep incase I wake up and you’re gone, but the one where I can see you from a mile away as long as I can hear you breathing inandout, inandout" SO CUTE. Ahh I love it. I absolutely love it.

Oh and you like Iris, by the Goo Goo Dolls? Haha that's like my all time favorite song. EVER.

First off I have to thank you for the reviews you've given me, secondly I have to thank you for giving me the chance to read such a piece of poetry.I love how you've never actually come out and said the words, the reluctance of the charecter is doubled through the reluctance of the author.

... tearfully real. all the promises, but underneath, a hidden sense of doubt. nicely written

keep writing!

I love the way you express the emotions in your writing so well. The simplicity is there, but hidden well by the way you twist words around to make something so sweet and innocent. Nicely done! Keep writing =)

it's always pieces like this that tell you if a writer can really write. and you can. you've got just what you need in this poem. it's mysterious, it seems romantic, it .is. i believe, and it's just so nicely written.

great job.

Oh... This is so... angsty but sweet and beautiful, at the same time... Beautiful job...

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very interesting. I'm not one for talking on phones; I hate them. But the sweetness and almost innocent quality of the poem is beautiful. Great work.

You just have this way of writing where everything's so angsty and wonderful. I love it. Keep writing! :)

What a lovely idea, this seems kind of sad but full of hope and love at the same time. A real floaty ethereal atmosphere atmosphere going on here which fits in perfectly with the idea of sleepy conversations. Really enjoyed this, well done x

Hey, this is really neat. I love it. You continue time and time again to stun me with your immagry and ability to write.

it's sad, but i get it somehow. it's really interestingly layed out. nice work.