great story. like it. hope u update soon. good luck on da rest of ur story.

I'm confused... :-) as usual... Is the love interest between Angelina and Blair or Angelina and Brandon? By The Way, I love these beginning chapters and hope you have fun writing the rest of the story.

-ChelsP.S. My middle name is Blaire...

UPDATE SOON PLS!

can't wait to see what happens next!! please update soon!!

Cool chapter, tiny bit short but good. Can we get a description of Brandon so we can visualise him.

great story...please continue...

beth is such a good friend! i hope ange would be there for her as she was there to help angelian through the break up. i believe shorter sentences would make your point punchier. :) anw, i really do like this story! :) sigh. i was wondering if it was blaire that likes angelina. now it may be brandon?

i like this chapter! (: however you do have to check certain words that you use, eg "of" instead of "off", "than" instead of "then." i'm liking the fact that Blaire's antagonizing Ange, its quite funny! (: adds some fun to the story! (: but why does he like doing it so much?!

now its gonna get interesting. :) you have to look out for spelling errors, not typo mistakes but things like "marron", "retorical", etc. as well, your sentence structures. eg. a comma instead of a full stop, etc. full stops in place of commas. other than that, i do really enjoy the story. :) however, i do want to know more of the twins' relationship! were they bad from the beginning? how about the mother? where's the father? i hope my curiousity would be satiated in further chapters to come. continue writing!

it started off quite well, i would say. you introduced the main cast, and the plot. Bethany sounds like a perfect best friend, perhaps almost too perfect. but then again, it may be just me. i'm looking forward to the next chapter! as well, i'm looking forward to the further development of the main character! though she's a geek supposedly, she "sounds happy and chirpy." (:

Yay you! I was happy through out the whole two chapters that I read all together. At the beginning of the chapter it seemed a little rushed and random, but some of it came together at the end. It was still really good.

Nicely done! :D I liked the slap, even if I hate the character. And I'm loving the whole "Blair notices but Blair doesn't care like the cynical prick he's supposed to be" kinda thing. No offence. She's cool though. :D Nice work.

Doesn't this go against the summary if Blair falls for Angelina or are you planning for Brandon to fall for her as well?Very interesting. Like how it's told from different points of view.Don't abandon this story.Keep it up

I like how you did it in Angelina's and Blaire's point of view. Maybe you should do something in Andrea's point of view. =)

Anyways, please continue! =)

great story. :]

i hope you update.. and soon