Wow. The imagery in this piece is intense. I love the metaphors in here, especially the hollow conch shells. It almost seems syesthetic ya know? Like blending the senses... how you can feel the sound of the hollowness of the conch shell, or smell the color of the emerald water, or taste the needles hitting your legs. Nicely done. Kudos, yeah?

I read this like a year ago and tried to come back to it, but couldn't find it. Yay I found it today! This writing is really amazing.

...this writing you have penned so beautiful and so distantly sad...drawn ever to the water's edge I can feel this writing as into the vastness of the outdoors it takes me...in an aloneness. This is so good a writing...

Very powerful and lyrical. More of a poem in prose than anything. Lovely job.