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| ode to a firefly 2006-06-09 ch 1, | abuseYes, an apology would be nice at this point and time. Not from you, of course, but from a friend of mine who claims to have been "stricken with apathy." I have come to hate that word. Amazing poem you have here. You deserve a cookie. =) ♫ Christine ♫ |
| silverwriter 2006-06-09 ch 1, | abuseI have to confess I'm not a good critic when it comes to poetry but I will do my best here. I liked this read as it seemed appropriate for the subject matter within its lines. I could not see any errors so no faults there. I can't really say much more than it seemed to flow well and I liked reading it. |