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ode to a firefly
2006-06-09
ch 1,
abuseYes, an apology would be nice at this point and time. Not from you, of course, but from a friend of mine who claims to have been "stricken with apathy." I have come to hate that word.

Amazing poem you have here. You deserve a cookie. =)

♫ Christine ♫
silverwriter
2006-06-09
ch 1,
abuseI have to confess I'm not a good critic when it comes to poetry but I will do my best here. I liked this read as it seemed appropriate for the subject matter within its lines. I could not see any errors so no faults there. I can't really say much more than it seemed to flow well and I liked reading it.
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