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xxxmusic is lifexxx 2008-07-22 ch 9,	abuseAH! What was with the Sauske and Naruto thing? IT WAS TOTALLY RANDOM! But, anyway, the rest of it was cool! I LURV THIS STORY OH SO MUCH! But, u r right, it is WAY unrealistic and crap! Even so, it's friggen cute, so there! THAT'S why I like it! :P You have to finish this, like QUICK! Otherwise I might nag u every onve in a while to keep u writing, cuz it's so good, and U WRITE LONG CHAPTERS! YAY! I dont know why, but every time I think about Kyle, I think about the song Ur So Gay by Katy Perry... Maybe it's just because he doesnt admit that he even likes boys for a REALY long time. Or, it SEEMS like a really long time cuz you make such long chapters, which earns u another YAY! If u havent heard the song, go check it out cuz I wouldnt want to confuse you, now would I? And maybe the song can inspire you! Well, Katy Perry is what I listen to when I write, so I'd like to think of it as inspiring music... Anyway, now I'm rambling and I gotta go, so BYE!
-MiserableAtBest- 2008-06-16 ch 9,	abuseI just read the whole thing and OMG you have to update...like now. :]. Your characters are so cute [expecially Joey]! I seriously can't want to read chapter 10
Bloodfeeder94 2008-06-01 ch 9,	abuseIt's pretty good...a little confusing in some parts, but a beta could fix that easily. I could be your beta, just PM me and we can talk. The only problem is that I can't figure out how to post stories, so i don't have the required amount of stories to be a beta, but you could always just send the next chapter(s) to me outside of FP (This goes for anyone reading this review as well. If you want me to beta your story, just give a shout!)
wake of beauty 2008-05-12 ch 9,	abuseAhh, I love it. Can't wait for the next few chapters. :)
Mythical Luver 2008-05-11 ch 9,	abuseI'll beta for you! I like this story, even if it is unrealistic, because, really, who wants to read anything realistic? Anywho... if you still need someone to beta for you, just contact me or something. Bye! ~Mythical luver
TwoClovedHooves 2008-05-11 ch 9,	abuseHey, this is a pretty good story! I don't care if it's unrealistic, it's just so...fun. And it is incredibly realistic, also, just in the way these people act. None of them are perfect, or fully sane, but that's what the world is: full of imperfect, insane people. Please update! Like, soon!
Hikari Elfie 2008-05-11 ch 9,	abuseWow. Confusion, a lot of that. Amusement, that too. The appearance of the Naruto characters made me laugh fairly hard, and the crack-ish kidnapping? Loved it. this is a pretty freakin' awesome story, when it comes down to it, so, well done! ^^ Thankyou for the utter crack which weasels it's way in, so far I'm loving it :) Love, hugs & wandering hands Hikari Elfie. (If you still lack a beta by the time you get this, I can do so for you if you like.)
Guakamori 2008-05-10 ch 9,	abuseWow, I love your story, he he. xD There were so many weird/surprising parts in this chapter, though! It was like, "Oh my gosh, wtf?" It definitely kept it interesting, he he. Anyways. The names of the two ninja--Naruto and Sasuke, I'm guessing? xD
Miss Mysty 2008-05-10 ch 9, anon.	abuseHah-hah, Sasuke and Naruto. It was so random and yet so funny :P Monica can go shove it up her... uh, not **. Down her throat, maybe? Iunno.
MisterScotty 2008-05-10 ch 9,	abuseIt's been a while so i've forgotten most of the story but i remember Joey and Kyle so it's okay! Yay to long chapters.
Grayson Briar 2008-05-10 ch 9,	abuseMarsha. Dude. Wow. 9700 hits? You're like... a star. You should definitely think of submitting some of this stuff into writing contests. I did one just a week or so ago for the Canterbury Tale festival and I won second place for grade 11. $25 at the UNB bookstore. That's not bad at all. And yeah. Your use of metaphor and simile? ** amazing! And so original, it's not like... cliched metaphors, it's really funny, cool, original stuff. KEEP WRITING WOMAN! Haha. For reals, it'll take you places.
magalina 2008-05-10 ch 9,	abuselool! Sasuke and Naruto? XD wtf?? Poor Joey, he always gets kidnaped and stuff... D: That was a fast update! Yay! Love this~ Oh, and I hate Rick :)
phoebe 2008-04-25 ch 8, anon.	abusei love it please update soon
Evelei 2008-04-21 ch 8,	abuse>_> Update! Please? I'll even cry! Or... or... uhh... Make you cake? =D lol but seriously, I am really loving your story and I can't wait to read more and see what happens.
it really is a REVOLUTION 2008-04-03 ch 8,	abuseOMG how did I just notice this awesome story was finally updated?!?! I LOVE the new chapter! I reread the whole thing since it had been like a year, and I've fallen in love with it all over again! Joey reminds me of my boyfriend, and it's absolutely thrilling. I can't WAIT for the next chapter!! Even though it may be a little while, if it's as good as this one, it'll be worth it!

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