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| Mythical Luver 2008-05-11 ch 9, | abuseI'll beta for you! I like this story, even if it is unrealistic, because, really, who wants to read anything realistic? Anywho... if you still need someone to beta for you, just contact me or something. Bye! ~Mythical luver |
| TwoClovedHooves 2008-05-11 ch 9, | abuseHey, this is a pretty good story! I don't care if it's unrealistic, it's just so...fun. And it is incredibly realistic, also, just in the way these people act. None of them are perfect, or fully sane, but that's what the world is: full of imperfect, insane people. Please update! Like, soon! |
| Hikari Elfie 2008-05-11 ch 9, | abuseWow. Confusion, a lot of that. Amusement, that too. The appearance of the Naruto characters made me laugh fairly hard, and the crack-ish kidnapping? Loved it. this is a pretty freakin' awesome story, when it comes down to it, so, well done! ^^ Thankyou for the utter crack which weasels it's way in, so far I'm loving it :) Love, hugs & wandering hands Hikari Elfie. (If you still lack a beta by the time you get this, I can do so for you if you like.) |
| Guakamori 2008-05-10 ch 9, | abuseWow, I love your story, he he. xD There were so many weird/surprising parts in this chapter, though! It was like, "Oh my gosh, wtf?" It definitely kept it interesting, he he. Anyways. The names of the two ninja--Naruto and Sasuke, I'm guessing? xD |
| Miss Mysty 2008-05-10 ch 9, anon. | abuseHah-hah, Sasuke and Naruto. It was so random and yet so funny :P Monica can go shove it up her... uh, not **. Down her throat, maybe? Iunno. |
| MisterScotty 2008-05-10 ch 9, | abuseIt's been a while so i've forgotten most of the story but i remember Joey and Kyle so it's okay! Yay to long chapters. |
| Grayson Briar 2008-05-10 ch 9, | abuseMarsha. Dude. Wow. 9700 hits? You're like... a star. You should definitely think of submitting some of this stuff into writing contests. I did one just a week or so ago for the Canterbury Tale festival and I won second place for grade 11. $25 at the UNB bookstore. That's not bad at all. And yeah. Your use of metaphor and simile? ** amazing! And so original, it's not like... cliched metaphors, it's really funny, cool, original stuff. KEEP WRITING WOMAN! Haha. For reals, it'll take you places. |
| magalina 2008-05-10 ch 9, | abuselool! Sasuke and Naruto? XD wtf?? Poor Joey, he always gets kidnaped and stuff... D: That was a fast update! Yay! Love this~ Oh, and I hate Rick :) |
| phoebe 2008-04-25 ch 8, anon. | abusei love it please update soon |
| Evelei 2008-04-21 ch 8, | abuse>_> Update! Please? I'll even cry! Or... or... uhh... Make you cake? =D lol but seriously, I am really loving your story and I can't wait to read more and see what happens. |
| it really is a REVOLUTION 2008-04-03 ch 8, | abuseOMG how did I just notice this awesome story was finally updated?!?! I LOVE the new chapter! I reread the whole thing since it had been like a year, and I've fallen in love with it all over again! Joey reminds me of my boyfriend, and it's absolutely thrilling. I can't WAIT for the next chapter!! Even though it may be a little while, if it's as good as this one, it'll be worth it! |
| PoertyQueen 2008-04-01 ch 8, | abuseOh god I cant wait for more this is just too ** funny |
| NOT an emo freak 2008-03-29 ch 8, | abuseOH! i'll beta if you haven't gotten an offer. oh, and sorry about the earlier review, i just really don't like gay being used as an offensive term. i mean, it's not like it's hurting you. so what? good chapter, hurry up, write more! |
| NOT an emo freak 2008-03-28 ch 4, | abusef u c k your reputation Kyle! quit being such a friking little b a s t a r d! stupid little gah! i hate Kyle! and Rick. seriously, NARROW MINDED LITTLE HOMOPHOBE FREAKS! STUPID LITTLE W H O R E S! |
| MistressELEMENT 2008-03-26 ch 8, | abuseOMFG! FINALLY! and i also wanted to thank you for including me in your last author's note at the end of chapter 7. i was seriously acting like some crackhead for about 2.5 minutes after i read it. also i love the cutesy parts in this story. and its so f**king hilarious when you have those really funny parts. I just start laughing my @$$ off! XD SO! you MUST update! ASAP! hopefully this'll persuade you into installing the next chapter quicker than usual. i'm seriously hoping it'll work like the last time. PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON! you have at least two to three months since i know how long it takes you to update and i am currently happy with this. also, that little B**ch girl better take her hands off Joey and Kyle needs to get off his @$$ and do something! OK, i'm done. ;) XOXO -ELEMENT |