So beautiful! Great piece and I can relate well. Good work! Vx

aw...that was so cute3...i loved it and it was no problem adding you to my favourite authors becauise from what i have read your poems are really well written!

wow, this is amazing, i completely understand this poem, and i hope the character wasn't you, because this is sad. very nicely written

Aww this is really cute... it seems like she has to get over him but he wont let her... love it anywaythanks for ur comment~rttm

Very nice. I agree with the Greymalkin, the last three lines really make the poem.

re: your question about my poem (the freeway). the real meaning is unimportant. i'd be curious to see how you interpreted it, though. thanks.

in regards to your poem, it's nice, albeit slightly overdone. i mean no offense. keep on writing.

This is very nice. I like the unexpected twist you gave this poem at the end – it kept it from being just another poem about a girl liking a guy. Keep up the good work!