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Lady Glass 2006-07-21 . chapter 1
Kinda the opposite of your usual love poems yet still done vair well. I love happy endings and that's what you gave.

Thank you vair much for your romantic-ness!!

Much love,

Lovey-lovey-pink-Lady-Glass
Britani- Friend of the Bears 2006-06-26 . chapter 1
I love this. But this one doesnt make me feel better, It makes me want to hug you *hugs* Im sorry dearie, It will be better soon
The Temptation Of Amadeo 2006-06-09 . chapter 1
I liked this. It has an intense personal feel, yet I feel that I can relate to it in a way.
Shasta Valentine 2006-06-09 . chapter 1
insightful.not your usual- but then again it's been awhile. "...how did i almost reject that special gift in which you give me...?" i can almost feel the anguish of the female to which this was adressed. deep. real. i wonder.is this based on your life?

-sV
myheartwantsyou 2006-06-09 . chapter 1
a bit to structured for my taste...its good but it sacrifices wording for emotion.

about your reivew, thanks for the critisism, it's more abstract poetry as far as my own taste i guess
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