I like it. Two or so minor typos but you'll be able to catch them. I love how the words flow very nice, like always. :) Keep up the good work.

Amazing! Love the story and the characters, JUST EVERYTHING! PLEASE WRITE MORE!

I really want to read this story but without paragraphs it kills my eyes.

Please fix this! It's enchanting, but it needs tweaking. You have to double space each paragraph if you type it or it won't work. I didn't finish chapter one since my eyes were hurting. O_o Please fix it so I can finish it! ^_^

Woah! This is a great story you have going here! It was so sad and it kept my attention with the curouriosity of what was to become of Fedora. I'm still anxtious to know what happens next. In a vampire world, a character needs to be careful if they come across a sexy, pale man in the middle of the night. Lol. Keep it up and I'll read and R&R.

Can't belive this hasn't been reviewed before.