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Reviews For: The Beauty of Midnight

MarshmellowParis
2006-10-28
ch 1,
abuseI really want to read this story but without paragraphs it kills my eyes.
Penguins and Popsicles
2006-07-25
ch 1,
abusePlease fix this! It's enchanting, but it needs tweaking. You have to double space each paragraph if you type it or it won't work. I didn't finish chapter one since my eyes were hurting. O_o Please fix it so I can finish it! ^_^
Crazy Bowie Girl
2006-06-09
ch 3,
abuseWoah! This is a great story you have going here! It was so sad and it kept my attention with the curouriosity of what was to become of Fedora. I'm still anxtious to know what happens next. In a vampire world, a character needs to be careful if they come across a sexy, pale man in the middle of the night. Lol. Keep it up and I'll read and R&R.

Can't belive this hasn't been reviewed before.
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