Beautiful poem. Well done :D

Hey, just letting you know, since you are the other reviewer for Kendyl Burch, I decided to check you out. For this poem, I've had this feeling before. I can definitely relate. It's really frustrating to like someone who doesn't like you back. Well done.

wanting your best friend? i know the feeling and all the pain that comes with it...

i like it.~Liz

Constructive criticism- "I was us to be together"should it not be... "I want us to be together..."Anywho, nice poem I can relate to. Keep up the great writing

I know the feeling. Your feelings were expressed really well.

P.S. My poem 'Please Stop' is based on truth, and it was written in spite. I still love my sister though.

Touching. Very original. Thank you for the kind review and keep up the awesome work. God Bless ya.

interesting... i'm sure many can relate to this feeling

good job

Oh, it's nice. Kind of sweet, and touching, but sad. I like it. Maybe I don't really understand it, but what I do understand is great. Nice job.

NiceReally like it!!