 crappitrash 2006-09-27 . chapter 2hah yongquan. finally found you. had no idea ohmm was you. this seems familiar...i am thinking 'really' here and i think you know what i am talking about. |
 negligible fictional force 2006-07-17 . chapter 7pretty; pretty.
& now that it's over i have to say that you brought out the piece of despair that lies in everyone (& in these cases your seven speakers) with fantabulous mastery & this was definitely a difficult project you chose to embark on; i'm glad you stuck.
depressing as the subject matter(s) was/were, these little pieces of pure pleasurepain really made my day. for serious. |
 negligible fictional force 2006-07-17 . chapter 5much pain; but good pain; i gape in awe & am rendered incoherent by your fantastic storyweaving skill. |
 negligible fictional force 2006-07-17 . chapter 4I LOVE THIS.while not as tug-at-the-heartstrings, i think this one is the most realistically-written, & brings across the speaker's faded but still beautiful mental impression of 'her' amazingly.i enjoyed the italy imagery much. |
 negligible fictional force 2006-07-17 . chapter 3i have to wonder why you are so good at these one-sided love affairs. once more, well-crafted & intricately written, therefore a beautiful product. i loved this one insanely. i mean it. |
 negligible fictional force 2006-07-17 . chapter 1i can't believe i never read this -- it's absolutely gorgeous & heartrending. i love it. the whole despair, the hopelessness, the wishfulness in the tone -- damn, i just love it. |
 crinkled aster ribbon 2006-06-11 . chapter 3i simply love the last line. |
 crinkled aster ribbon 2006-06-11 . chapter 2gorgeous. this entire collection is so creative, the way you've planned it out.
the third paragraph is love. |