OMG so I've been busy for like forever lately and so today I actually got a chance to go around fictionpress..and as I was wondering, i startign thinking of this story and what's happen to it and I coudlnt remember who was writing it! So I'm like oh well Opal updated I'd better read and then I come to find out that you are writing this story! so as you can tell I'm very happy! Good update now update soon!

yay! You updated!
Really good chapter! Can't wait til the next one!!

Oh no!! I liked Jack! Why does he have to be bad now? Ah! Poor Melissa . . .

Wow, I'm going with Talia has gone like insane but I don't know if I can blame her, or can I? I don't know. Update SOON!

Hey, Ben is a believeable chaacter! Do not say that he isn't, I love him!

Talia is having a really rough time, she shouldn't have that diary anymore!

And don't worry about the dates, honest mistakes are nothing to be embarrased about!

~Tzotel

Nice chapter. Talia definitely seems to be losing it . . . poor Gary. Good work =)

Well now I am not confused at all and that is just terrible of GARY but I guess that it's not entirely his fault! Oh no, I'm guess Talia's dad got to Alicia, that's not good! Update SOON! (and sorry it took me so long to read, I was out of town)

Ok, a sad thing just came to my notice. You had Alicia die on April 15, 2004. But there are diary entries on October 8, and 16 of 2004. Shouldn't she be dead then?

And did Talia's dad sleep with Alicia?

UPDATE SOON!

~Tzotel

Oh no, Gary is not gonna like what he finds out in that Diary! Not good! And poor Talia, she doesn't want to tell Gary about his dad...

~Tzotel

Take your time with Can THhis Be Me? the last chapters of stories always have to be perfect! This was really good, so Daniel is Gary's dad? Ew...that is so gross!

~Tzotel

Another good chapter, but I have a feeling that you told us that Daniel killed her...i think it would have been better to wait to reveal the killer until later, for suspense, just my opinion...It was really good, again with the words and grammar, but very good!

~Tzotel

Ok, so I finally got around to reading your story, sorry it tookso long! I was so busy with school and finishing my own story, but now I have no school and am starting a new story, I have no rush! This is really good, some words and gramatical mistakes, but readable and enjoyable!

I'll read more soon!

~Tzotel

omfg! i love this story! o jesus i hope talia and gary stay together... omg yah i love this story and can't wait to read the next chapter!

I'm kind of mad that Talia forgave Gary so soon. I mean if I found out that my boyfriend stole my diary and slept with my best friend, I would NEVER forgive him. I would also probably go off on a "I never loved you" rant or something just to ** him off and make him feel guilty. But I suppose Talia is just nicer than me, hehe. Great chapter though =)

Exams are done as of yesterday so now I don't have to tell my mom that I'm "studying" and can read!! lol the whole Leo thing with the unnamed girl kind of confused me a bit but thats ok! oh no! Gary took the diary! ahh that's going to lead to trouble! update SOON!