   All Alone With Her Thoughts 2006-08-20 . chapter 1I love it. It flows beautifuly and the choice of words is amazing. Keep writting, you're great!-RowanThanks for reviewing my poem by the way =D |
 Fabian Cortez 2006-06-20 . chapter 1Your work is always moving one way or another. You have a style and empathy with everything you tackle and this is no exception.
Beautifully crafted as always and a fantastic last line.
Very Well Done.
KEEP WRITING!
F.C
Just thought you might like to know that finally there is a new chapter to "Torment3" for your delectation. Look forward to your thoughts as always..^V^ |
 Beautifuly Broken 2006-06-11 . chapter 1this is really awsome it hits where so many things are hurting right now... |
 Midnight Star Lights 2006-06-10 . chapter 1This is a beautiful poem.. great job!
TE he.. me likes..
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 Kayumanggi 2006-06-10 . chapter 1Wow... This is a great poem! The choosing of words are very vibrant and the emotion can be felt all over the poem. You can really write terrific poems. I love it.
Don't Stop Writing... |
 pixieofdarkness 2006-06-10 . chapter 1i like this, its well written and expresses alot of emotion |
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