|Reviews for When I look|
| All Alone With Her Thoughts 9/13/06 . chapter 1
Not one of your best, but it was
| Just-try'en-to-speak 7/3/06 . chapter 1
| Pink Sparrow 6/14/06 . chapter 1
I love the way it starts slower, but then gets faster as though the speaker gets more excited the more she thinks about it. Its beautiful and the images are goegeous. great work.
| fayreweill 6/11/06 . chapter 1
aww.. how sweet