Wait so they never went home, and met up again. This was a really good story but I felt like it could have been way longer with a lot more detail and a happier ending but the funny thing is that I loved it. You have a way of putting a story accross that leaves you wanting more.

~Obsession

Wow.
I just found this and I read it in one sitting!!
I loved it!!
Anyway I'm a little confused. Does Wendy get home? What about the other Neverlanders? And what does the title represent?
Overall it was a marvelous read. congrats!

I love it. It was amazing, Great twist of the story. Did Wendy really die? Good jod.

That was really amazing!
I love how you wrote the story!

But so does that mean that Peter and Andrew went back to their mother?

Oh geez!
I want to cry!
Must. Keep. Reading.

Wow.. Great story!

It was nice that you switched the good guys and bad.. or well the more good anyway haha.
~*~Ngoc1231~*~

You left me wordless with the ending. The only thing I can say is that this story is amazing. Confusing at times, certainly, but wonderful all the same.

Thank you for writing this.

Aww! That was kind of sad! But a really well written story. And that last chapter was reminiscient of the book 1984. Don't know if you've ever read it but its basically about how nothing is real. Lol
I really enjoyed this story though. The ending, though, was sad, but I like sad endings because well-done ones are hard to come by. Everyone does the happy ending. To be honest, though, I was kinda hoping for a happy ending to this story. I thought it would be like they all went back to their parents and Wendy and Peter met in real life.
But still this is going on my favourites list :)

The dialogue between Peter and Wendy is so cute. =)

Oh. Wow. This is. I can't even say anything.
I never really had any feeling towards the story of Peter Pan, only that I was kind of upset that Wendy and Peter never ended up together (I'm a die-hard romantic. I look for romance everywhere), and I'm hoping that this will satisfy my Wendy/Peter craving. =)

Beautiful! I loved the opening line :D Now, off to finish this :D!

I am absolutely in love with this story. My only concerns would be that I think this possibly belongs on and that the ending, while brilliant, needs something more. I feel like it is incomplete and I was really left with my breath caught in my throat, no exhale to look forward to. Even a one sentenced conclusion would end my curiosity, like "Wendy and her mother were never better" would be lovely.

oh...my...God.

that was absolutely, positivly, stunningly amazing.

it was...wow.

well, for one i more than loved it. it was...God i can't even think of words for it!

very, very, VERY, excellent job. it was amazing.

-Rad Like Whoaa.

Good start. I like the opening. The opening sentence was a little bland, but we all have those--me, too, so not critism there. I'm just happy you didn't start out with "my name is . . ." The lack of detail (names, physical appearances, and such) and the good descriptions of feelings makes it an interesting start. It caught my attention and makes me want to read more. Great job!

~Twilight Starr~

i just read that straight through, it was great. i sort of wish that a few things were made clear, like if the children are all sent back home after they disappear... but other than that, it was an imaginative, original take on the classic. awesome job :)