love how you wrote it. awesome job.write on.

Good, don't know why its titled "Encore" though.

Really nice - I think everyone has experienced this and you captured it very well.

Wow, I totally understand how you feel. Really well written.

I like the description you used. As I read it the word "paralized" came to my mind. Thanks for your honest reviews!

i like the ending.. the flow of this poem is great.. i think everyone can relate also... great piece

dramatic self-indulgent rant. perhaps best left in a private journal. things like these get so easily passed of as poetry. Encore?

This is really good. A very powerful piece and I like it a lot. Good work and thanks for reviewing! Vx

Good poem..bad feelingmakes it more relatable though xx

yes u really should get over him. come on. STOP! he has a girlfriend. okay look. i noe its hard but come on. its like harry and occumlancy. he cant master occumency because he cant control his feelings. okay maybe its a bad example but come on now.