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Reviews For: A New Beginning or The End?
Nobody-n-Particular 2006-07-13 . chapter 1
Nice rhyming - I love the last line with "fiery core"
Aleonic Relic 2006-06-29 . chapter 1
Nicely done, ever written a haiku?
simpleplan13 2006-06-18 . chapter 1
I love this... this is exactly how i feel right now... great job
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