Lovely work here. You really do excellent short poems. This is well articulated, its format lends itself to the flow of the piece, and the word choice is exactly what it should be. Very, very nice!

wow...i love ur poems

I really love those first two lines... they're beautiful... the rest is great too

are you a gay guy or a dyke?im just wandering and guess what i enjoy miss spelling shit just to piss u off :}

OMG, short and pretty chilling. I had to read it twice. But I was all like, "whew.." So, in short, good work.

I love the line "fingerprints left into obliviation", but the whole poem is fantastic, really.