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| upsidedown.underwater 2007-09-13 ch 1,  | abusethis was sad, but really good...nice job :] |
| Cheesy Brussle Sprouts 2007-03-14 ch 1, | abuseOMG. This was just so inspireing. I love the progression of the poem. The hope that it gives is just so plalible. Very well done. Kira |
| Amanda Rhode 2007-01-25 ch 1, | abuseVery inspiring. Strange middle stanza, but very peaceful. |
| embedded in fire 2007-01-12 ch 1, | abuseAw.. I really liked this poem! I see myself in it. Great job! |
| An-Jelly-Ca 2006-12-16 ch 1, | abuseLoved it! itw as totally amazing! |
| over-achieving-misfit 2006-11-10 ch 1, | abuseThe sinisterness of the secret boat, the love for life with the flag. A fantastic combination, love the emotion, and the story! |
| ZionsAflame 2006-09-26 ch 1, | abuseyour writing makes me feel as if you have a dark secret. I'd like to know...anyway this is as good as the last! |
| temerity 2006-09-24 ch 1, | abuseThe first few lines, in my opinion, are the absolute best in the entire poem. The emotions and plot were very well expressed. Keep writing! |
| popprincess-angel 2006-09-12 ch 1, | abusei really like this, keep writing.Jean |
| All Alone With Her Thoughts 2006-09-12 ch 1, | abuseYou have an amazing way of using the english language. Amazing.Thanks for yeat another review =D~Rowan~ |
| the-foresight 2006-09-10 ch 1, | abuseI can see why you get so many reviews, that was so good! Such simple language but used in such an eloquent way. I'm quite jealous. |
| A Midsummer Nights Sacrific... 2006-09-10 ch 1, | abuseThat was amazing it had such a wonderfully powerfull meaning, I love just the general flow of freedom and love and happiness. The one thing that kind of made me brake the flow was the rainbow flag but that's just because i'm me and It made me think of the pride parade (But tat might be cuz my freind went 'an has been telling me stories about it for the last while...) So you need heed me not! ~Midsummer Nights ((And I edited Release because I didn't like that line either it's better now! :D)) |
| fallenblackangel 2006-09-10 ch 1, | abuse*tear* I luv this one! Really nice! Keep it up!! -Fallenblackangel |
| Frost letoya 2006-08-18 ch 1, | abuseonce again i love the imagery :) the feeling that i get is the feeling of you leaving a restricted life to placing one foot forward in the right direction in which your heart wants to go...you fear being brought back...but at the end you finally get the courage to move on into "your" new world. but yes i love the imagery once again. this is going on favs cause of the emotion and the power KEEP WRITING! ^_^ |
| dustytiger 2006-08-07 ch 1, | abusewow, i'm at a bit of a loss for words it was such a great peice, it's so well written, and so thought provoking, it's beautiful really, thank you for the review, and thank you so much for sharing this wonderful piece of poetry |