Heyz!

This is a very sad poem, it's so true though how some people get pressured by their parents and really want to change their whole life for them. Hope it's not you Nicole (person who talks about herself in the third person...)ANYways, hopefully you can update not only your ficpress stuff but your fanfics! Yes, I managed to somehow stalk my way into any of your stories b'coz they're so good! Okai I think I should shut up now..b'coz it sounds like I'm an obsessive stalker which I'm not really..okai that didn't sound convincing but whatever ...

lotsaluv,s2_perfection

Hello NicoleDude I finallyd decided to actually read poetry and so... anyways i think the only poetry I'll ever read will be yours. Ok i HAVE the bestest plan ever... when you post your ficpress story and like if you decide to post it on a different pen name put the story in the favourites list of Dizzy Dreaming. Then i won't know that YOU wrote it and so then you can get an HONEST opinion of your work! How's that? Hey enough of the other crap... this poem is actually -shock horror- REALLY good! This isn't based on you is it? I hope not because that would be sad, but i guess that this poem sort of represents all of us. I mean dude we all go to one of the best schools in NSW which basically means Australia and who knows if that's actually what we wanted or what our parents wanted. Ok i don't think that last sentence made sense so just ignore it! lol ok then well cya next week. Enjoy your holidays!cya

A very sad poem. The third person narration, along with the parents, gave it a sense of oppression and restricion. Good write, I could empathise well with the daughter :)

i can really relate to this, i'm sure others can to. i think lots of kids have been pressurized by their parents, when they don't realise that their kids are suffering. i'm glad someone's touched on this topic. really well done.

-trinity