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| Briar's Thorn 2007-12-13 ch 1, | abuseOH I Love it! you and i would definately get along. i agree with youfull heartedly! its one of my favs! keep up the good work! chin up! i think you would like my poem 'painting the roses red' please r&r my work! i would very much apreciate it! |
| Rovandin 2007-02-17 ch 1, | abuseI feel the same way. Reminds me of old Modest Mouse lyrics. This one is really good. |
| Grene Lefe 2006-08-12 ch 1, anon. | abuseyou might not have liked it all that much but i did. i loved the rhyming a lot, and what the poem is saying. "What's the use, really? Want to know just why?" i kinda think about that too sometimes--what exactly is the point of anything...? |
| kris345 2006-07-06 ch 1, | abusei loved it - not your best peom, one of the better ones i bet |
| Cariwyn 2006-07-05 ch 1, | abuseI really like this. I think you expressed what you were trying to wonderfully. I love it. Keep writing and posting, even if you don't think it's your best, because other people (like me!) love your work. You're very talented. Never forget that. |
| Der Patrizier 2006-06-24 ch 1, | abuseThis is a philosophical poem. Another thought provoking one. very honest aspects of life and nice art you have here. This is promising. Try checking out my works when you have time. |
| SwitchVale 2006-06-23 ch 1, | abuseYou may have not considered it your best, but I thought it was really good. Presented a lot of good questions and had a sort of wavy flow that made one think. |
| luke staden 2006-06-12 ch 1, anon. | abusei really liked this one. it has got a great point. yes i like the all american rejects (im seeing them in concert soon). you are so right "sugar we're going down" that song should be shot and so should fall out boy. Panic at the disco, i have their album, i also have tickets to see them on christmas eve! yep i love em. keep writing ~godly luke staden~ |