Now THIS looks to me like a Steampunk Epic. I hope you publish this someday. You might even win an award.

Just wanted to leave a note that I enjoyed the story... and hope there will be more someday ;)

You know...the more I read this...it doesn't really seem steampunkish at all. I get a more...cyberpunk kind of feel from it. Doesn't really take away from the story, just makes me feel different about it. Everything seemed fine, if only a little boring...I'm not a big fan of Hansette.

I hope this doesn't sound like I'm flaming. (I'm not!) But it's late and I don't really feel like saying much...oh well...

Keep it up. :/

who doesn't love steampunk?
Interesting story you have here! Love the desriptions and various characters. Keep up the good work

Wow.

I found this story a while ago and stored it away for later reading.

Now I'm hooked.

I love all the characters, as well as the world its set in.

Keep up the good work!

beautiful, simply beautiful, i had to re-read it a few time, and every time i did, this because so beautiful, and its stuns my imagination, it makes it go off in every direction and more!

This chapter was beautifully written and has more emotion in it than most of the professional works I've read. I've been sucked into this story for months now, and it only keeps getting better. Bravo!

Hey, I was hoping you would update this. I'm glad you did. I really enjoy this story.

keep it up, huh?
-BD

Awesome story, I really like how we see more depth to the characters in this chapter, and how Hansette is beginning to develop in an interesting way. I really wish I could see more frequent updates (tho I know you can't rush art ;) ) as its sometimes hard to remember what has happened previously. Maybe post a mini synopsis when you post after a long update? Please please continue this, it is awesomeness and awesomosity and if it was in the shops, I would buy it

I really enjoy how you described her feelings while she was drunk. We see her control on her emotions fail quickly, which I found fun and fascinating to read. Add to that more tension between Hansette and her bosses. I do wish you'd update more often, it's such a good read.

Just finished a marathon read, and about to Befriend this story on myspace. I really enjoyed it thus far! I can't wait for the updates. I feel sorry for Jupiter though... poor guy.

I really like your story. The descriptions are good, and I like the characters. Palmquist is my favorite :D! I'm looking foward to your next update!

This was a great chapter. I feel so sorry for Wakefield and Riga creeps me out. This story is so good and kind of disturbing. Anyway, please keep updating, I love to read this.

Once again, your chapters continue to increase the tension and flesh out the world of Anapura. At no point was I bored or tired of what was happening, be it mundane or life-changing. Bravo.

Love it