Ok, from "oh light! oh sanctity!/she is white-clothed and fleeing,/past the pews & down the aisle of the cathedral" my mouth had dropped. I think by "bishops lurk the pews and hide behind columns./she stops before the blood stained chessboard,/then blinks and sips wine from her chalice./denial has never before tasted so sweet." was the point when it hit the floor.Ah, beautiful, beautiful, beautiful... really goo images, and for some reason I geta good sense of COLOUR from this poem! *FAVZ & TEHN TEH DIEZ!!1!!THIRT33N!!1!*

Oh, this is just beautiful. You're such an amazing writer...I mean...some of these lines just had me gaping with how perfect they were...

“what do you believe in?”“you.”, and now, nothing.

that especially was just gorgeous. I am totally adding you to my fave authors list.

/and contrary to common beliefshe really is as good as she looks./

/she is a snow white angel,/

/“what do you believe in?”“you.”, and now, nothing./

wow wow and ,uh, wow. this is so antique and epic like and deep and meaningful and intriging and extremly thought provoking. just wow. tori amos- wey!

very wonderful poem. it's very light on the surface but seems to portray some deeper meaning...i pictured a girl on her wedding day fleeing the scence. great job on this. ~*

i just- *deep breath* - i just can't believe how gorgeous writing can be. wow is all I can say/think Definitly one of the best (maybe even the best?) so far. You amaze me. I know i praise you often, but this is above anything I have commented on (even maybe the flowers- even maybe alice, and who would have thought?) really- just- amazing.

beautiful.

absolutely magnificent.

nothing else. nothing else to add to that.

very well done

Its perfect.

Every word hurt and felt so right; i loved it. Justsobeautiful.

~* Noelle

This is profound and elegant. Your diction is hypnotic and the images in this poem are haunting. I could praise this forever, but I don’t have that long. Keep up the excellent work!