The style, the wods, the stly; I am completely floored.

* Noelle

i don't know why but i liked this peice, it was real, without being over the top, it seems personal, so htank you for sharing

I love the raw intensity of this. The way you restated the beginning of the poem with bits of after-thought truths in parentheses was brilliant. Keep up the excellent work!

This is a really interesting piece. The way you spun the same images into the beginning and end shows real creativity and talent. I enjoyed this. Great Work!

Ellesmere