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| The Intelligent Designer 2006-12-29 ch 1,  | abuseAnother perfect rhythm and flow to the poem. The ideas behind it are intense and interesting. I really had to think about this. |
| darkmistresslae 2006-07-23 ch 1, | abuseAnother chillingly wonderful piece of poetry. I absolutely loved the first section/stanza. "my feet leave prints I do not make" |
| Yorba Linda 2006-07-02 ch 1, | abuseI love the writing scheme and the small breaks in it! It captures the raw emotion very well. It was a good poem. :D! And thanks for the review!By the way; I know some people on your favorites list. RootbeerFloatKillerLoverand I've read BloodyDoll's works. I like boys kissing boys, too!And I'm a boy; a gay one at that.Hah.I even have my own stories about it.xP.Check it out sometime. |
| dustytiger 2006-06-11 ch 1, | abusegreat piece, i really liked the end it really made a point, thank you for sharing |