This entire thing was so random, and I loved reading it.

I just read the first chapter, and I am hooked! This is so funny! Great job!

Aww, this story is so cute _, Tris is definitely my favourite character but I love Sabra as well and who on Earth could resist Adam and Brian's sparkly, magical, and forever-bonded love.

i like this a HELL of a lot better than the last chapter. *shudders* i HATE rape. loathe it. but this was a good chapter!

REALLY glad there was no rape in the real version. i can't STAND rape! it's horrible!

oh. poor brian. I'm glad he wasn't like that in the story. that would have been very sad. i liked raised by wolves brian better.

That last chapter left me confused...

Such a switch! I'm not sure what's going on now!

Why is he cutting? And all depressive? Isn't Adam supposed to be at college? Or Uni? Or... What-have-you.

Love the story anyway!

Byee!

NO! 33rd chapter made me SAD! That is SO not the Brian I read about in this story! Anyways, I lurved the rest of this SO SO much, and I gotta say, after Bri and Adam, Tristan was my fav! Bri and Adam were just too cute together, made me wanna squeal a lot! I cried in the beggining of the 32nd chapter, cuz I thought Adam was goin really far away, and Brian would never be able to see him again... *sniffle*... But, anyways, Robin was right, nothing is more sparkly magical and undying than Twilight! I lurvs it! lol! Fantastical story, though!

hehehe... um... Was this, like, rated M or something? I didnt see it, but um... I like the story and all... this chapter just kinda startled me. Really good, though _ I give you da perfect cookie for ur most definitely awesome story!

hilarious! completely inappropriate, as expected. hilarious! i liked the reference to caramel popcorn with rainbow sprinkles and green m&m's. once you forgot to put the "b" in "Sabra", so it spelled "Sara" and i know someone named Sara who is no Sabra. But i'm not mad. but it was kinda funny! i can't believe it's over!

that was hilarious! loved it! especially the "is that a crime? in some states." 'cause it's true and still funny! and i love how Brian rips of the head of everything

I was lost and confused during most of this. But highly amused.

Yup! I understood everything! YAY! . That was a great chapter by the way! I liked the Hottness meter conversation!

you're studying forensic science? that's so cool! so interesting. though i suck at science. otherwise i'd probably be a autopsy person. yay for cutting up dead people!

That was hilarious. And awesome. I liked it bunches. The only problem I had was sometimes I didn't know who was talking and when you skipped to the next day or the next week, or through one of the school periods.