OMFG. This is unbelievable. I'm a swimmer, so it was cool to see everything from a metphorical point of view. I love the metaphors and everything about it. "What's the cure for swimmer's heart?" Aw, so cute. "Sunglass sky", "broken heart towels." Loved it. Marvelous job. Going on my favorites.

Haha. I love the end. What an excellent metaphor. I think an extended metaphor is the "literary term." Haha. Anyway the line "Like tissues for chlorine tears" struck me as just... Wow. I highlighted it when I read it so make sure I mentioned it. Anyway, this was aboslutely wonderful. It came full circle and if you went back and read it again, keeping the theme and hints at love more in mind, it makes a lot of sense... And really speaks to the heart. I love this. And the title's really cute.