it took me a moment to understand this one...But then I did. I realy enjoyed this one. It has great symbolisim.

Oh... It's so visual and pretty. I like how I can imagine everything so clearly, and I feel as though I'm doing it myself. Great poem.

Great poem! The emotions [tension, resentment?] are there, and I can relate to it. I like the symbolism, and the rhyming too - it's somehow very... subtle. As in the lines don't have the same number of syllables and stuff, but still, the rhyming's there, and it's good, not unnatural. My favourite rhyming couplet's the one with the "run out" and "draw more from its emptied spout" - those two words make a fairly uncommon pairing, and the imagery was vivid. Really good job :)

This is well written, I like it a lot. Keep writing!

~Anna~