Well... it's definitely very interesting. I'm pretty sure I see the point. The formanting is very different and I like it. This poem could have been longer, though.

Very powerful poem. The way its situated gives it also great appeal to a wider audience, for it can be viewed different ways, yet it's not vague to not make sense. Good job here.

I believe that there is not just one single explanation to a poem or anything else. Just like beauty is in the eye of the beholder... the way you understand and connect with something is slightly if not tremandously, different with each person. Hehe. Even the creator might have more than one way of seeing their own work. ;] Anyway.

The formatting is very unique. So I like that. Good job.

I know what you mean in this poem. Good job! Write on!

~Anna~