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| an-entraced-pyromaniac 2006-07-16 ch 1,  | abusekoolu have so many poems |
| nadorj 2006-06-22 ch 1, | abuseWow it has a lot of passion and like allways great rhyming keep up the good work! : >< : |
| Embellished Heart 2006-06-21 ch 1, | abuseCool little poem. Nice work...loved the end. |
| sylvia's syndrome 2006-06-12 ch 1, | abuseI like the repetition of the two lines. It makes the speaker in this poem sound almost eccentric or disturbed and gives the poem as a whole a slightly creepy atmosphere. Keep up the good work! |