Reviews for Teahouse Psycho - FictionPress.com

no.peace.los.angeles 2006-10-04 ch 1,	abuseThis is an interesting piece. I don't know that I understand it entirely, so I feel odd reviewing it, but still. The first stanza has amazing imagery, and it's such a strange comparison. Strange poem here, but it's well done. Keep writing! :)
crazy dog events 2006-06-12 ch 1,	abuseThe only line I don't like in this is 'of acidic hazel desire.' It feels so amateurish, kind of supermarket paperback, compared to the rest of it (and the rest of you work, in general.) Other than that it's quite lovely- and it'll probably be something I'll read repeatdedly, just to see what aging does to it. Nice.
frigg 2006-06-12 ch 1,	abuseI adore this dear. Wow. I love the imagery especially the 'acidic hazel desire' and 'suck in your storm...' and well the whole last stanza. The only crit I have to drop the 'tomorrow' off the end of the second stanza. I think it is already implied with 'Breakfast'. Gorgeous stuff (+ faves) Kelle
Jezsh 2006-06-12 ch 1,	abuseI love this piece. It's so devil-may-care. Those last lines sound brilliant; I love how sharp this is, wickedly witty and fascinating.
breezy nostrils 2006-06-12 ch 1,	abuseinteresting and almost pyschotic, but i supposed that was the point. nice work.
HellHeartedlyBent 2006-06-12 ch 1,	abusehaha loved itactually found it kinda funnyfirst stanza is very pretty