Wow...Your words have captured a lot of emoution in this poem. I doubt I could ever understand what it's exactly about but I still think it's amazing. If you've read my other reviews you'll know how in awe I am with your work. It's amazing how any emoution can be turned into words that give off a special kind of vision to those who read them. Your poetry is really good.

wow... this is so powerful and flows so well. I like the formatting as well. Its hauntingly beautiful, nice work.

Dark, brutal, honest; it is like the sary-type of truth that you don't want said.

Its pretty and hard to read and amazing, all at once (which is, frankly, amazing).

Lovely.

* Noelle

I really liked this poem. It's so direct and powerful. It really got me into your feelings. Keep up the good work.

*shudder* this is dark, but very well written, i really liked it, thank you for sharing