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| aripie 2008-08-08 ch 13, | abusejust.too.cruel. *weps* pls update soon :) |
| Daydream Nation 2008-06-02 ch 13, | abuseOh my lord. I can't believe you just left the story there. It's killing me. I love this thing SO, SO much. The writing, the plot, the language, the nuances, the character development--they all make this story so fuckin' INTENSE. This story's one of the most epic things I've read in a while. |
| UTTER FRUSTRATION 2008-05-07 ch 13, anon. | abuseah, fuck fuck fucking fuck. it can't end there! that's really just not fair. at least put a note in the summary that it's not been updated in...years! |
| color-of-her-eyes 2008-04-29 ch 13, | abuseI agree-you really can't let the story end like this (well, it's not an end, is it). I really, really like it- it's so exitcing and I love the characters. I know it must be difficult to get back into writing this, but if there is any chance, please continue it! |
| little-twinklestar 2008-04-27 ch 13, | abuseI really liked the story so far and I was kinda shocked to find out, that it ends here... any hope that you´ll continue the story? I think a lot of us would appreciate it :) |
| Shalli 2008-03-22 ch 13, | abuse...No. I refuse to believe it ends there. Not when it's a story where I actually connect with the main character and DAMMIT. Yes, I love this story. Could you tell? I'm sorry this isn't very constructive, but you had me sitting on the edge of my seat and then there wasn't any more so I'm kind of...jumbled right now. |
| Iishareviewer 2008-02-15 ch 5, anon. | abuseHahaha, I slep exactly like Tristan, right up ti the arms folded across my chest. My friends tell me that if I die in my sleep no one will ever notice... Anyway, I love this story, and I want to hug Theo, but then I forget, the no hugging/touching thing that he has going on. This story is too addicting and if I want to get out of bed before ten o'clock I have to leave now... Bye-Bye! I will make another appearence, be forewarned. I have an awesome laugh. Mwahahahahahahaha... |
| A.K.A. Writer's Block 2008-02-13 ch 13, | abuseoh my god. wow. talk about painful cut off ending! well, let me just say that i adore this story and that i honestly hope that you'll update it... soon...ish... and that i will read it like no story has ever been read before. and that didn't make any sense at ALL. --a.k.a. |
| Hikari Elfie 2008-01-26 ch 13, | abusehey. wowee. I'm a bit disappointed that this story appears to be discontinued, but all in its time, yeah? this story just blows my mind. utterly. totally. I really do hope you intend to continue this. I love these kind of stories, the ones that make you think. This story just captured my whole attention, and I didn't stop to actually do anything until I reached the end of chapter 13, and even then I sat in general confusement as to why there weren't more chapters and reviews. Theo is a strange character, as is Tristan and I adore the brief interactions between the two. A brief coverage of what I think of this story? Just...wow. I can't even think of a word to describe it. Good luck with updating etc. hope the muses strike soon. Hikari Elfie. |
| Himawari 2007-11-25 ch 13, anon. | abuseI really enjoy this story and Imperfect Cadence the best. They're my favorite of your works, way more than Just Friends. The characterization and your writing style is just absolutely amazing. I look forward to any and all updates in the future! |
| melon 2007-09-19 ch 13, anon. | abuseYou can't leave me hanging there dude! ^-^ Theo is so sweet...and I'm really curious as to what comes next... |
| Posed to Death 2007-08-31 ch 13, | abuseOkay, I'm going to take a wild guess as to what's really going on. This actually is a game. The players are hired actors. Gina is the mastermind/behind all this. Why do I think this? Too many people have Acting and/or psychology as hobbies, and would therefore be able to IMPROV EVERYWHERE, not to steal a phrase or anything. I think this entire game is to help Theodore. If Gina were truly his friend she'd probably know better than to take him with her to something lke this unless her goal was to help him. Not just help him in a little way, but help him lots. She wouldn't just drag him a long to a murder mystery game and hope he'd come out all puppies and sunshine as an afterthought. The birthday present is just an excuse. I think her two friends are in on it as well, but I'm not exactly sure. All these characters are great, and Theo is very good at being psychotic. Thought I really do think Theo would notice there being no chimminies, but that wouldn't exactly do much for surprises. I'm happy to see that it looks as if you DO still update this, nice. |
| rocky19 2007-08-30 ch 13, | abusei really like this story, you should update it! |
| Emily Rose 2007-07-19 ch 13, anon. | abuseI love it, it's great and I'm hooked... but is it ever going to be finished? |
| Lazy-Hime 2007-07-11 ch 13, | abuseI was nearly in tears several times while reading this. PLEASE update as soon as you can. I'm falling in love with your work. Because they're so unique and entertaining. ^^ |