Aw. Poor Cash.

I know that too well. Well, actually I don't but I mean the situation.
You'd think he'd have the decency to at least take it off during their "escapade".

People like him really don't deserve to be married. And Cash is disappointing. She's so much better than this!

I still like her though. She was pretty awesome in Luka&Shoe.

BTW, I really love your illustrations of Luka & Shoe. Everyone looks awesome. I wouldn't think that you'd be an ex-ex-artist. Looks like just an artist to me, a good one at that.

And hey, it said Canada in your profile! That's where I am! XD

I like this. You're very good at writing.

Nicely written. I like it. :D

Nice, descriptive, and short story. Good work.

~Twilight Starr~

I liked it.

What a douche! I didn't really find any more insight into Cash's character other than she falls under the old adage that sex and logic occupy two distinct regions of the brain, neither of which can operate at the same time. Also because I was too busy being revolted by that bastard. Maybe you could have him go club a baby seal and make racially insenitive remarks next? Start a whole series about Michael, a credit to the y chromosome...

Very good as usual, though I think I went from having a reader's crush to wanting to stab Stan after that atrocity of a text message :D

Ew...seriously, what a perv. He was gonna give himself a hand job using her hand? Not nice. The gold wedding band - nice touch. Suddenly everything seems even worse. The whole little boy thing makes a lot of sense as well now - you don't mention how old he is, but I'm guessing he's too old :: shudders :: Just the thought of him is gross.

It's a great on-shot/start of a story.

aw it was all nice and dandy until the last line. Great ending. Cause it made my heart plummet and go >< aw. I loved how you structured this story to let that last line make a statement. I felt so sad when Cash wanted him to just stare at her sleeping but instead he wanted sex. >< Poor Cash. Great mini story. Is this going to continue? I'd still prefer it if you continued with Luka & Shoe soon! =) Please update! I love your stories. Am i first review here?