Aw, sad. Good, concise poetry. I like the plainness of it in this case, cause pain is plain sometimes.

Powerful piece.

Stunning poem. Truly excellent. Good ending. Keep writing!

~Anna~ ^_^

Great poem...I too turned to poetry in an effort to heal from some pretty rough situations. Inspiration from our hurt. Amazing work...keep writing!

Woah, I really like this! It's very simple, but intense, and you pack a lot of emotion into it even though it's pretty short. Great writing, and a powerful ending!

Sounds like someone was having a bad day?Nice poem.

good ending