 Julia Lucrezia Hanazono 2009-10-26 . chapter 16Poor Thanatos. He was cut up and hurt by humans. How terrible. And those poor Naga children...they were captured and butched. And the Soakas are attacking the castle! no! |
 Julia Lucrezia Hanazono 2009-10-24 . chapter 15Aw! Yurara! I knew Andromeda was gonna be mad, and I hope Yurara turns out to be a sweet little human/Naga and kind just like Manami! Great work! |
 Julia Lucrezia Hanazono 2009-10-24 . chapter 14Apostle seems rather suspicious. I hope he's not trying to hurt Io. And I KNEW Andromeda was gonna get jealous! I better hope she doesn't hurt Manami in any way. Great job! I'm loving this the more I read it! |
 Julia Lucrezia Hanazono 2009-10-24 . chapter 13So Thelios's uncle is Adonis and Adonis was the one who set Andromeda with Thanatos for ulterior motives? I better hope it's nothing terrible! |
 Julia Lucrezia Hanazono 2009-10-24 . chapter 12Aw! Thanatos and Manami confessed their love! I wonder how Andromeda will think of this? But it's a good thing Thanatos gave up his original intentions. He really does care! hahahaha! |
 Julia Lucrezia Hanazono 2009-10-24 . chapter 11I KNEW IT!! I KNEW Hiroyuki was hunting for Nagas! I knew he was a suspicious person all along! I better hope Manami will save Thanatos from that baka! |
 Julia Lucrezia Hanazono 2009-10-24 . chapter 10This fisherman seems rather suspicious to me. I better hope he's not planning something bad for Manami. |
 Julia Lucrezia Hanazono 2009-10-24 . chapter 9Oh no! Awiti's parents were killed! And she doesn't want to go home because of it! I feel bad for Awiti. And I wonder if Andromeda will meet and hate Manami? I hope that doesn't happen. Nice work! |
 Julia Lucrezia Hanazono 2009-10-22 . chapter 8I wonder of Thelios and Awiti will fall in love? And is Awiti an Indian name? It kind of sounds like it to me. Nice work though! |
 Julia Lucrezia Hanazono 2009-10-22 . chapter 7I think Andromeda's being a little too clingy to Thanatos. I hope he goes with Manami. They're better together...and I hope Andromeda doesn't go hating Manami when they meet. |
 Julia Lucrezia Hanazono 2009-10-22 . chapter 6So the Naga's name is Marjani. I'm glad she decided not to hurt Manami. And Io is Thanatos's sister!? I never knew that! But great chapter so far! |
 Julia Lucrezia Hanazono 2009-10-22 . chapter 5Oh no! Manami's mother was killed, Thanatos is above her "corpse" and now Manami is captured by another Naga! Great work! |
 Niki Tori 2009-06-19 . chapter 16First off I apologize for my late review. I feel like such an awful fan-girl. Though I had read it already it was before I had to go to work and the days just rolled together. But here I am off for the next few days. YAY!!
Poor Thanatos. i_i
I am glad he ended up well with Manami. =^_^=
Now that Andromeda has to be deposed of.Seriously she is becoming more and more an annoyance.
!!@Go Destroy her plotting Thanatos@!!
This was a good chapter. Keep up the work Melissa. Thank you for the reviews its truly appreciated.
~much love and many hugs~
Niki |
 Utena Himemiya 2009-06-18 . chapter 16 This was definitely worth the wait. I loved the way that you characterized Thanatos. You made him so believable and human. I absolutely felt horrible for his past and man, things are so put together in this story! Simply wonderful! |
 HFGLF 2009-06-18 . chapter 16This chapter is interesting for a lot of difference reasons. It's nice to see Manami come to a revelation as far as Thanatos' past is concerned and it's interesting to see what happened to him to make him as cold as he is now.
I certainly hope that they can get through everything together. Also, I like the fact that you made Andromeda strike now. It puts a wonderful sense of danger to the end of the chapter and I wonder what will happen when Thanatos finds out that Adonis is on Andromeda's side. |