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Julia Lucrezia Hanazono 2009-10-26 . chapter 16
Poor Thanatos. He was cut up and hurt by humans. How terrible. And those poor Naga children...they were captured and butched. And the Soakas are attacking the castle! no!
Julia Lucrezia Hanazono 2009-10-24 . chapter 15
Aw! Yurara! I knew Andromeda was gonna be mad, and I hope Yurara turns out to be a sweet little human/Naga and kind just like Manami! Great work!
Julia Lucrezia Hanazono 2009-10-24 . chapter 14
Apostle seems rather suspicious. I hope he's not trying to hurt Io. And I KNEW Andromeda was gonna get jealous! I better hope she doesn't hurt Manami in any way. Great job! I'm loving this the more I read it!
Julia Lucrezia Hanazono 2009-10-24 . chapter 13
So Thelios's uncle is Adonis and Adonis was the one who set Andromeda with Thanatos for ulterior motives? I better hope it's nothing terrible!
Julia Lucrezia Hanazono 2009-10-24 . chapter 12
Aw! Thanatos and Manami confessed their love! I wonder how Andromeda will think of this? But it's a good thing Thanatos gave up his original intentions. He really does care! hahahaha!
Julia Lucrezia Hanazono 2009-10-24 . chapter 11
I KNEW IT!! I KNEW Hiroyuki was hunting for Nagas! I knew he was a suspicious person all along! I better hope Manami will save Thanatos from that baka!
Julia Lucrezia Hanazono 2009-10-24 . chapter 10
This fisherman seems rather suspicious to me. I better hope he's not planning something bad for Manami.
Julia Lucrezia Hanazono 2009-10-24 . chapter 9
Oh no! Awiti's parents were killed! And she doesn't want to go home because of it! I feel bad for Awiti. And I wonder if Andromeda will meet and hate Manami? I hope that doesn't happen. Nice work!
Julia Lucrezia Hanazono 2009-10-22 . chapter 8
I wonder of Thelios and Awiti will fall in love? And is Awiti an Indian name? It kind of sounds like it to me. Nice work though!
Julia Lucrezia Hanazono 2009-10-22 . chapter 7
I think Andromeda's being a little too clingy to Thanatos. I hope he goes with Manami. They're better together...and I hope Andromeda doesn't go hating Manami when they meet.
Julia Lucrezia Hanazono 2009-10-22 . chapter 6
So the Naga's name is Marjani. I'm glad she decided not to hurt Manami. And Io is Thanatos's sister!? I never knew that! But great chapter so far!
Julia Lucrezia Hanazono 2009-10-22 . chapter 5
Oh no! Manami's mother was killed, Thanatos is above her "corpse" and now Manami is captured by another Naga! Great work!
Niki Tori 2009-06-19 . chapter 16
First off I apologize for my late review. I feel like such an awful fan-girl. Though I had read it already it was before I had to go to work and the days just rolled together. But here I am off for the next few days. YAY!!

Poor Thanatos. i_i

I am glad he ended up well with Manami. =^_^=

Now that Andromeda has to be deposed of.Seriously she is becoming more and more an annoyance.

!!@Go Destroy her plotting Thanatos@!!

This was a good chapter. Keep up the work Melissa. Thank you for the reviews its truly appreciated.

~much love and many hugs~

Niki
Utena Himemiya 2009-06-18 . chapter 16
This was definitely worth the wait. I loved the way that you characterized Thanatos. You made him so believable and human. I absolutely felt horrible for his past and man, things are so put together in this story! Simply wonderful!
HFGLF 2009-06-18 . chapter 16
This chapter is interesting for a lot of difference reasons. It's nice to see Manami come to a revelation as far as Thanatos' past is concerned and it's interesting to see what happened to him to make him as cold as he is now.

I certainly hope that they can get through everything together. Also, I like the fact that you made Andromeda strike now. It puts a wonderful sense of danger to the end of the chapter and I wonder what will happen when Thanatos finds out that Adonis is on Andromeda's side.
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