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Reviews For: Good Intentions

Asia Ralaia Schiegoh
2007-01-30
ch 1,
abuseI really actually liked that little plot you had going on there. I mean, just work on the grammatical errors a tad, but other than that it's stone-cold good readin'. My favorite line is, “And I will dance at his funeral.”

Well put in. And thanks for reviewing my MOTH story!


~ARS
tears of emerald
2006-08-14
ch 1,
abusewhoa. Scary. Geez, I hope I don't marry a person who hates me.
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