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| Asia Ralaia Schiegoh 2007-01-30 ch 1, | abuseI really actually liked that little plot you had going on there. I mean, just work on the grammatical errors a tad, but other than that it's stone-cold good readin'. My favorite line is, “And I will dance at his funeral.” Well put in. And thanks for reviewing my MOTH story! ~ARS |
| tears of emerald 2006-08-14 ch 1, | abusewhoa. Scary. Geez, I hope I don't marry a person who hates me. |