Sweet, almost-fluffy poem. Refreshing to see something on this site that isn't about cutting or 13-year old angst.

Pretty good for your first ever poem. :)

that was a good poem it was mushy and i hate to say it but as good as this was i prefer the darker stuff.

I always like your poetry becuase of the strong imagery, good rhythm, and excellent wording. This fit into your usual mold of well written work. I will agree though that it was a tad bit cheesy and predictible. It was sweet, but maybe a little too mushy ;).

Anyway, great job, as usual.

~Krys

Aw...so sweet. I love the simple words, so honest!

oh mike. oh MIKE. a love poem!? i'm so ashamed.

still, it's tempting and sweet and wistful...but maybe a tad melodramamtic. there's a fine line between sweet romance and cheese.

yay cheese.

i liked, but the idea of you writing love poetry terrifies.