! great work. Neato. Short'n'sharp'n'sweet. Brill!

Aquila (yes it me artychick. I changed my name for... personal reasons... *shudder*)

Short and powerful. You have amazing talent!

/Addy/

Thus reminds me of the Salem Witch Trials, how even innocent women were killed. It's simple, but raises the issue of male dominance in our world very effectively.

I liked the first three lines. But I didn't see the point of "Must have forgotten Evil Girl". It felt out of place.

Wonderful concept though. Keep writing!

Ouch! This is a very painful piece of work.

Angry feminism, anyone? ... What basis do you have for your poem, anyways? There ARE issues to do with inequalities between genders, but your writing doesn't touch on any of them.