The chorus is very catchy, nice song!

Why can't the songs on the radio be as well-written as this?

Aww, I like this. -nodnod- You're good. =) Write more!

Track Team Arms? Haha, people don't run on their HANDS. Lol. But I forgive you, and I liked it all the same.

I really like this. I love how you kinda brought the artist into the song/story, "And there’s a girl who doesn’t mind/That you’re still so unsure/Kiss her, and hold her,/Tell her that she’s kind of sweet/Tell her that you don’t mind/That she’s still so unsure…" Definitely liked this one.

its nice. i like it! =)

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Hey, I really like this. You should sell it to some singer and have it made into a song. I would buy it:)

Hey, this is a really good poem/song? I mean i really liked the analysis of the star boy. He isn't all that glamor and shine, but deep inside he's just like the rest of us. I enjoyed reading this piece.

Hey, grown-up PanWhat are you doin’?You’re insecure andWon’t admit itBut that shell of confidenceReminds me of a prince who hasn’t

favorite part...nicely written...i think everyone knows a boy or two to be able to relate to this...

Aw, I like it! Does it have music?

~j. lynn

You absolutely cannot fathom how much I hate you for being able to write poetry. I couldn't write decent poetry if the alternative was being locked in a very small cage for twenty-four hours with post-Isadora's-death Simon and a lot of angry rabid cucumbers. Yeah...

An intersting poem, but I haven't seen any such varsity boys at my school...maybe I'll see some next year in high school (sounding like this is some sort of tourist attraction xD) Anyhoo, good poem, hope you're feeling better!

whoo ! i like it. i know a guy at my school exactly like that. good job as alwasy!!

Haha..perfectly sums up some people I know. As you said, we all know this guy. Well done.

Awh!This was cute!

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