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| efphrim 2008-04-10 ch 25,  | abuseMy God. I almost cried. Although I would like to know what happened with Miah and Sky. |
| Laurena 2008-03-27 ch 25, | abuseum it seemed like a clipped ending, there was no completion. But i guess thats was suicide is, a clipped ending, it was upsetting for me because i didnt feel that Keegan had suicidal tendencies, i understand that he was anorexic, but the ending just doesnt seem to fit the story. But i really did enjoy it very much, especially the small elephant parts, it was an interesting read, but a disappointing ending. |
| andrea 2008-03-24 ch 25, anon. | abusethe ending had such a huge frigging impact, and i know this was finished a while ago but god! i don't know what keegan could have done to fix things but i wished he'd not done what he did. your story really sucked me in whole. all i can say is wow. now i'll in ahead and do myself a favour and read the rest of your stories. maybe i'll give some useful comments then and not just gush enthusiastically. i like ur devious mind (and i mean that in a good way) |
| Blazequeen 2008-03-22 ch 25, | abuseOk, call me a sap, but I'm in tears from this. it was such a beautifully written piece and so..bloody poignant. And yes, the story of the smallest elephant makes perfect sense to me. Lurv for the story. Its just a pity we don't get to know how everyone else reacts to the end. |
| A.K.A. Writer's Block 2008-02-08 ch 6, | abuseeh...i think i'm supposed to want nehemiah and keegan to date, but i want skeezie and keegan to date... ah. well, i'll find out what happens! |
| yayawhynot89 2008-01-02 ch 25, | abuseAH! that was so sad :( i really wish i could have seen everyone's reaction to his death though |
| yayawhynot89 2008-01-02 ch 22, | abusethis chapter had me bawling! Good Job and poor Skeezie I like him a lot and that teacher should be fired...more please? |
| Vicious Hyperbolizer 2008-01-01 ch 25, | abuseFucking FANTASTIC story. I am now forced to hate you though, for the ending. |
| Catseye*Rose 2007-12-11 ch 25, | abuseO_O Well, that was...unexpected. And now I'm horribly depressed... Still, it was a really good story, and you developed the characters very well. Good job! |
| Catseye*Rose 2007-12-11 ch 23, | abuseWell, that really REALLY sucks. |
| Catseye*Rose 2007-12-11 ch 22, | abuseThat teacher is evil. EVIL. Oh no, the notebook! |
| Catseye*Rose 2007-12-11 ch 20, | abuseGuilt and starvation cannot be a good mix. He really should sort out this relationship problem...the food thing seems to be being taken care of :P |
| Catseye*Rose 2007-12-11 ch 19, | abuseSkeezie's such a sweetie ^_^ |
| Catseye*Rose 2007-12-11 ch 18, | abuseGah, they're so cute! Ugh, sickness is no fun... |
| Catseye*Rose 2007-12-11 ch 17, | abuseNu! =_= Poor Skeezie...still, saw this coming from a mile away :P |