It's very well written- but I'm not too sure whether I should laugh or cry after reading it. It strikes a bit too close to home for me to tell, as I've often said things fairly similar. Anyhow, good work all in all.

Nice! I hate most of this stuff, so...good rhythm. I especially like the one about Valentine's Day. It's all so true. There is no love any more. Teenagers are "in like". They have to be. It's all a picture, a pretense, a mask...

Oh, I loved it!

Geez we can't always be expected to have tanned, smooth legs, when boys' are all hairy. Unfair and stupid.

Did you write it in a specific order? Because I think if it was reshuffled a little bit, it would make a much bigger impact. I like the last bit though. It's a fitting conclusion.