seriously! u r ** GOOD! love ur storie. it have keept me up a few time, even thou ive read ur storie countless of times. hope ull update soon. i cant wait too hear wat jack & alex is up too next ;)

i love it so far, please update soon, this is the best.

uumm.. he does realize that if he cripples her, then he can't ** her anymore if its up to her torso? but then again, i do know that it was only a threat. oh please update again! this story is way too good to be stopped now! you came so far already!

man dude, your stories keeps me awake!

aaw. i think in the end she would become damned for eternity.

haha i absolutely love her attitude!

Your story is being plagiarized by /s/4852753/1/Imprisoned_in_his_haunting_embrace

So...I'm assuming this story is at a permanent stopping point? I hope not because where you've left it is a rather cruel place to stop for all eternity. (Catch the hint. CATCH THE HINT!) =)

I would enjoy seeing more of the story. You do great work and it's appreciated.

I agree wholeheartedly with sunny-raindrop. So many times I've gotten into great stories and their authors leave them in the midst. There are so many readers on FP that would be OVERJOYED to see an update from you, me included! This story is too magnificently written and developed for you to give up on it... it's really heart-breaking.

I hate that I never learn from my mistakes. I start to read a story, get all excited, addicted, fond of it and then a big painful huff. I can't believe that it wasn't updated in one and a half year. Do we have any hope? I wish we did. It ended so abruptly, I need to know what happens to them, who the boys really serve, if Alex falls for Jack in the end. This story deserves to be continued, believe me. I could hardly find another story on FP with such complexity. Such well-built complexity. (Not one that gives you the feeling that you are watching a cheap soap opera. I appreciate originality. And I love this story.) Pretty please?

so good please update soon

I love it. I hope you update soon.

Okay... I'm writing this on your review page because that seems to be the thing to do... Forgive me if this sounds a bit harsh, but according to several of your readers, it would be a great service to them that you withdraw your endorsement of my story on your page as I am a horrible ** that is withholding chapters from my readers. Yes, I am upset, yes, I am writing this angry, and yes, I probably shouldn't, but I only want to please your readers and give them what they desire. Please withdraw your endorsement. I would greatly appreciate it.
To the readers of Lobsterdevil's work, thank you.

Wow.. that was incredible, the passion, the tension, the delvilish ways.. it's just amazing! Please update soon!