|Reviews for Janie and the Cretin|
| buttshovingmonster 11/27/06 . chapter 21
That was so sweet! the twins are so adorable and the lobster story never fails to crack everyone up! I am all for a sequel!
| angels and effects 11/24/06 . chapter 21
Aww, I love this epilogue! Seeing Jhonny and Natalie all grown up into teenagers is a little weird though, haha. What can I say, I think those two were meant to be together. It'll be so cool if you could do a sequel on those two alone XD I love the names Tyrone and Tyler so kudos to you for choosing them! Tyler has got to be my favourite male name ever. And Mike and Janie got married, that isn't any surprise. It's just a really cute epilogue, a bit rushed though. I find it a little weird that Janie keeps referring to Mike as the cretin, it would have been better if she just referred to him as Mike. They're married and all, but I guess it was to keep to the title.
Can't wait to read your new story! Ice cream actually helps with writing, haha. :)
| Lena Niccolas 11/23/06 . chapter 21
awesome. a sequel sounds great too.
| becxfok01 11/23/06 . chapter 21
Just wanted to say this was a good story -esp since it was only your first one! Hope you write a story about Nat and Johnny!
| Callisto Jean 11/23/06 . chapter 21
That is so cute! Aw I wanna cry! But *gasp* no sign of Creamy! Haha.
Actually, it wouldn't really be much of a deal if you didn't put up a sequel. I like how it ended with Natalie and Jhonny, but that's just me talking so yeah...
I love it! I love it! I love it!
| Alenor 11/23/06 . chapter 21
aw, that's a nice ending. i love it! this was a wonderful story. i'm glad they sorted themselves out and stayed together. cya later Alenor.
| anonymous25 11/22/06 . chapter 21
aww i loved this story hope u do a sequel with nat and jhonny thatd be awesome anyways great story sad to see it end tho
| elisefey 11/22/06 . chapter 21
Aw! Very cute ending. Perfect use of an epilogue! Good job!
| pennels29 11/22/06 . chapter 21
that was awsome! are you going to do a sequel with johnny and natalie, that'd be really really cool!
| Unsociably Acceptable 11/21/06 . chapter 8
I like your story!
| ahopelessromantic 11/21/06 . chapter 21
the epilogue is real good. well, the whole story is.. a sequel?hm i like how this one ended ;)
| Sophia Nicole 11/21/06 . chapter 21
Aw! Gotta luv those tow! So cute. The twins were adorable!
Luv'd the whole story!
| chic rebel 11/21/06 . chapter 21
it was beautiful. icant believe its done. im glad they're married and TWINS!:D, hope u come out with another story. kudos for this one.
| pixxidust 11/21/06 . chapter 21
very nice story. can't wait to read your new story!
| elohimdancer319 11/21/06 . chapter 21
Aww, good epilogue. I like it. Nat and Johnny sitting in a tree... lol.