Hai there!

That story was so amazing. I really, really loved it. And I insist on the really. Thanks a bunch for posting it on here, you've made me a happy froob. Hope you'll keep up with the good work

I first read this way back years but can't remember if I ever finished it. I re-read it again today and all I can say this is a very sweet and witty story!

Super enjoyed reading this story! The conflict was really good and how you made johnny and natalie sort of like mike and janie.:D well done.:D

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GREAT! I freaking LOVED IT!

Yay! Great story! But shouldn't the "Cretin" be capatalized? I got so confused because I stopped reading for a while and then started reading again and I'm like "Cretin? Where is this cretin?" Jokes, jokes! really great story!

Oh my gosh I love you! This is the cutest story! I almost died of happiness when I read his note to her. I wish I had a guy that would write those things to me. He is such a sweetie. This story is adorable and i can't wait to finish it. I am confused about one thing though. Why is she taking algebra as a senior? Especially when math is her favorite subject? I though algebra was usually taken by freshman. That the only question I have about this story. Other than that its amazing. It makes me deliriously happy. : )

Well, usually I wouldn't review a story, but it was just so cute-how could I resist? I loved it! Two characters especially-Mike, Creamy and Janie. The epilogue- for once actually satisfied me and well, I loved this story ) Good job and I hope to see more from you

i love your story its so cute and dont we all wish we had someone like mike in out lives but just wanted to let you kno that there were a few typos and stuff so i guess edit it a little but otherwise great story also do gavin and kate end up together and any chance you will resume the sequel.

seriously love this story

I must have read this story a dozen times already, but I still cannot get over the emotions that you managed to portray so beautifully in the last couple of paragraphs. I really love it.

Aww such fluffiness! Bless ya, thats probably the sweetest ending i've read in a long time. maybe you're sequel could be on Nat..? Anyway, nicely done. x

Why do you keep spelling Johnny's name wrong. You spell it Jhonny. Besides that and a lot of grammar/spelling errors and leaving words out it's a great story. Please don't be mad it's just some constructive criticism.

they will have beatiful children together.

hell yes, interaction is on its way. i like it!

how come she doesnt get that her cretin wants her back? i want more interatcion between them!