well written

i would like to read about fist and lipstick

Poorly written...thou the story line is interesting.
I'd like to say "please re-write it" but i cant talk cause i've never finished any of my stories or taken the time to write the next chapter. "^-^ *sigh*

Its nice

Okay, well, my email is being lame so I can't be on my orignal account, but I do have to tell you this.
This story is absolutely amazing. I stumbled upon it while I was looking through the recommendations in Soompi and at first, I had seen the story a couple of times in people's signature and I was just like wel, it doesn't seem that interesting. (I'm trying not to do that anymore, judging a story by whatever the case is, lol.)
Honestly, before reading this the best story of all time to me was Conversations Between Us by Solangel on Soompi and I thought 'psh, no one can get better than May and Jae Won,' (Have you read Conversations Between Us? You should! It's great!) and then I read this and I was like '...wow, this story is totally epic!' I legit read your story until I finished it which was about five hours or more of me sitting on my butt and staring at the computer screen for forever but it was all worth it and skipping my homework, lol.
And really, when I finished I went to school the next day thinking ‘I need to read the sequel SO BAD.' and at the same time I was hoping it wouldn't be like those other stories where the prequel is the only good one and the sequel are terrible. You proved that thought completely wrong. I just finished the most up-to-date chapter of F&L2: The Silver Crescent and really, I can’t wait to see what happens next!
ANYWAYS, as I was in school, my thoughts were drifting off and I was jealous of you because you could write such an amazing story whereas my ideas or plots couldn’t be as carefully planned and written like yours. -sigh- Everything just links up and you really know what you’re doing.
Aya is not really Aya?! I never thought of that until well, when the hospital scene came up and they saw Aya with Ayane. GOSH, you really know how to write a story. All these twists I could never think of…LOL.
Wow, I’m getting off-topic, but yeah, I really love Conversations Between Us, sorry to Solangel, but I think I’m more in love with F&L. CBU was probably the first best-read from Soompi that caught me by surprise with the plot and then I read yours and I was like wow, just wow. CBU does have something on F&L, but really, F&L is just so so so amazing, haha. (SOLANGEL, I STILL LOVE YOUR STORIES THOUGH.)
Well, this is pretty long. I should leave you alone. (: kekeke, showing my support for F&L! Teehee, I’m trying to get my sister to read this story. Absolutely amazing.
By the way, did F&L ever win a foty on Soompi? Normally, authors put [foty winner blahblahblah] in the small description space and I didn’t see it in F&L or maybe I’m blind but if it didn’t, it should!
OKAY, now, GOODBYE (: hehe, to sum it all up, I’m Saovady and I love your story!

This was one of the most amazing stories I have ever read. I truly love Ayane, Kosuke, and everyone else in their world. This was one of those stories that really grabbed my attention and made me feel like I was so close to the action. I loved it!

My only criticism is that many times, you used "has" instead of "had", causing a tense mix-up. But still, in the end, I loved the story so much that I overlooked it and just mentally replaced the word x]

This story really has given me some inspiration :) Thank you so much for writing such an awesome story and sharing it with all of us. It's been such a pleasure and a great escape to read this story, and I can't wait to start on Number 2!

I'm looking forward to reading the rest ^^

2 long years of being on every day to see the new chapters uploaded. Angsty here and there, funny, serious, entertaining always and I missed the last three chapters being uploaded for nearly three months! Thank you so much though, for such a grand story. I hope it's published in some form some day. I'm off to read the promised part two now!
~Ravenking

I also forgot to add the fact that I was stuck reading this story practically all day.. And there's still a part two! Took me about 10 hours to read these seventy-some chapters, now i'm about to make another trudge through part two, oh so tempting.

Wow, I'm pretty much speechless, the whole thing was so intense; you captured the scenery, characters, and emotions brilliantly. I don't know what else to say other than I'm utterly amazed. Totally props on this story.

This story is, to be honest, poorly written. You may have a good plot or should I say a little cliche. You need to rewrite it. That's my advice.

Whoa. That...was insane.
And also, it was really good =)
I loved the way you used descriptive language,
really vivid!
But I have to say, it was a bit cliche/corny at some points.
I don't know, may be just me but I found it unrealistic at times.
It was very sweet though.
I'm gonna read the 2nd one now =)
GOOD JOB!

wow

OMG OMG OMG
I JUST READ IT ALL AND I CAN'T STOP CRYING!!
PLEASE BRING KOSUKE AND MIYAZAWA BACK TOGETHER, PLEASE!!
And Crosse...
I hope he's okay...
And I hope he gets his revenge!! I hope all of them get their revenge on the ones who ruined their lives!!
It's EPIC and this really IS my favorite story!!
Can't wait to read the second one!!
*Waiting eagerly*
x

this fiction is the best!!

W.O.W.

I'm at a loss for words. Seriously. This is the best story I've read on FictionPress yet. It was amazing!

I'm still kinda dazed, keep writing...

~ Tigery ^_^

PS: Did I mention how amazingly awesome that was?