... house burned down? I know how that feels, happened to me a few years ago. This is really great though, the imagery and symbolism is perfect for how the poem is supposed to be read.
Love the mention of drinking Coke, brings a lot of realism to it.

Just reading this makes me feel relaxed and carefree. You describe the contentment and joy of simple things perfectly. Really awesome. Please write more, finish Dadagarknedegess!