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| Rikichi's Buddy 2007-01-20 ch 3, | abusewow. all three of these poems...all of them are really amazing. i wonder why i haven't read them until now. anyway, i really regret that i waited this long to read them. |
| E.S. Lundgren 2006-07-09 ch 3, | abusei like the "drama is your key" part the best, this was a little laid back, which is cool. nice job. |
| SirScott 2006-06-21 ch 3, | abuseThe best one so far. It really brought a smile to my face. Wishing You Good Health And Plenty of Wealth, ~SirScott~ |
| Octello 2006-06-20 ch 3, | abuseWhen I first read this, I actually cried. Even now, it touches me in a way that I cannot begin to explain. |
| SirScott 2006-06-14 ch 2, | abuseThose are pretty good poems. I loved how the flowed in my head. Wishing You Good Health And Plenty Of Wealth, ~SirScott~ |
| Octello 2006-06-13 ch 2, | abuseOh my gosh. This is beautiful and haunting. Whom is it for? |
| Octello 2006-06-13 ch 1, | abuseHey! You put them back up! Sweet! |
| E.S. Lundgren 2006-06-13 ch 2, | abuseFor you're dead to all you lure-das ist sehr gut. |
| E.S. Lundgren 2006-06-13 ch 1, | abusei like the metahpor to being like glue towards the middle of the poem, but in my opnion this isn't one of your stronger ones, the ryhmes felt a little forced, but i do like the metaphor!! |
| Anarchic Authoress 2006-06-13 ch 1, anon. | abuseWow. I enjoyed that a lot. I like you rhyme scheme, and I enjoyed the way you put it together. Nice work. |