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Reviews For: Morbid Eyes of Glue

Rikichi's Buddy
2007-01-20
ch 3,
abusewow. all three of these poems...all of them are really amazing. i wonder why i haven't read them until now. anyway, i really regret that i waited this long to read them.
E.S. Lundgren
2006-07-09
ch 3,
abusei like the "drama is your key" part the best, this was a little laid back, which is cool. nice job.
SirScott
2006-06-21
ch 3,
abuseThe best one so far. It really brought a smile to my face.

Wishing You Good Health And Plenty of Wealth, ~SirScott~
Octello
2006-06-20
ch 3,
abuseWhen I first read this, I actually cried. Even now, it touches me in a way that I cannot begin to explain.
SirScott
2006-06-14
ch 2,
abuseThose are pretty good poems. I loved how the flowed in my head.

Wishing You Good Health And Plenty Of Wealth, ~SirScott~
Octello
2006-06-13
ch 2,
abuseOh my gosh. This is beautiful and haunting. Whom is it for?
Octello
2006-06-13
ch 1,
abuseHey! You put them back up! Sweet!
E.S. Lundgren
2006-06-13
ch 2,
abuseFor you're dead to all you lure-das ist sehr gut.
E.S. Lundgren
2006-06-13
ch 1,
abusei like the metahpor to being like glue towards the middle of the poem, but in my opnion this isn't one of your stronger ones, the ryhmes felt a little forced, but i do like the metaphor!!
Anarchic Authoress
2006-06-13
ch 1, anon.
abuseWow. I enjoyed that a lot. I like you rhyme scheme, and I enjoyed the way you put it together. Nice work.
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