Geez, I'm the latest reviewer. I should feel special. lol. IDk, maybe you'll read this and maybe you won't. MAybe you're not on ficpress and maybe you still are. Who knows? Well i don't. I just like to say that it was terrorizingly powerful to me. Each line struck me pretty hard, leaving me breathless. I loved it.

_Kari

yes, very nice indeed. loved the way 'papercut' and 'up' kinda rhymed... do you put music to these songs? They'd sound great.

Wow! This is SO powerful. Really impressively and expressively written. Keep it up.

personally, I think beginning of this piece is a little bit clumsy, but as it goes on it really gathers momentum and focus, and I really like the descriptions and sort of breathless in-denial-but-not-quite quality to it. And the line about kisses like sponge...oh I like that.